My first draft is a very basic outline of all the points I have looked at. It was primarily used for showing the base of my essay to Hannah so she could go through it and discuss the points I had previously explored with me. This was key to finding out what would and what would not be useful.
My second draft was about three quarters of the way through my essay and it helped to check my grammar and also make sure I was sticking to my overall structure which I had set out for myself after. In this case I have moved some paragraphs around in order to help my text flow better. I highlighted also where I needed to add in more analysis.
This was my final essay draft and it was the one that I went through and looked at before it was going to be handed in. In red I have checked through my references and verified spelling and grammar.